Other Name(s): Endriel, Terminus
Pronunciation: Own - dree - all
"Colossal Terminality"
oh, look! there is Tavin! Hey Tavin!
from the Universe Sandbox 2 variant of Antarius System
inspiration: Jupiter
deepfriedfrenchtoast's Hectarus
original version of Ondriall was red, instead of orange.
Date of Discovery: Sol 229.2070
Class:
Cool Super Jovian
General Characteristics:
Jovian Masses: 5.10 mJ
Jovian Radius: 2.10 rj
Density per cubic centimeter: 0.73 g/cm^3
Avergage Temperature: 219k - 247k
Surface Gravity: 30.6 m/s^2
Age: 5.557 SBY
Atmosphere Characteristics:
Atmospheric Composition:
60.73% Nitrogen
10.47% Ammonia
9.05% Phosphine
8.52% Methane
3.88% Water Vapor
3.18% Oxygen
2.94 Carbon Dioxide
1.04% Ammonium Hydrosulfide
0.19% Trace Gases
Atmosphere Pressure: 4.91 atm
Atmospheric Mass: 5.74 aE
Atmospheric Density: 5.77 kg/m^3
Orbital Characteristics:
Orbital Parent(s): Kaotetra
Orbital Period: 0.845 SY
Semi Major Axis: 0.866 au
Orbital Eccentricity: 0.034
Orbital Inclination: 0.00151°
Rotational Period: 0.572 SD
Obliquity: 2.36°
3rd Planet from Kaotetra. Lies in between the orbits of Vykkonis and Athodis.
A colossal gas giant with contrasting bands, a deep blue atmosphere, and a numerous amount of moons. Ondriall is the biggest planet of the Kaotetran System, with Arkkana being larger than Odriall, which is considered to be a Hyper Jovian. Ondriall contains many moons, with Tavin being the most important. Ondriall has aerial life, like Arkkana, which takes on gargantuan sizes.
Planet Lore
Ondriall, formerly known as "Terminus" (if you remember you deserve a cookie), is the second largest planet in the Antarius System, just behind Arkkana (2.10mj - 2.74mj). Ondriall is known for its striking appearance, of the contrasting deep blue atmosphere to orange and white bands. Ondriall has many turbulent bands, with storms created from various convection zones. Although menacingly large storms are where most of the strongest convection zones are, some regular bands maybe even stronger. This is possible since most storms are created when two opposing convection currents either go alongside each other or simply intersect.
Ondriall also has a very high core temperature, roughly ~26500k or that of a B1V Type star (By Human standards). The pressure is so high with that of 130487918atm. The planet that currently holds the highest atmospheric pressure is KRO-8135, with a pressure of 4.1 million atmospheres! Ondriall is also known to have certain layers in its sky, with each passing layer nearly having its own type of life. Whether it would be the calm, upper levels of the atmosphere, where bands are less turbulent and temperature is cooler, or the dark stormy depths, where the light never shines, and even deeper resides even more stranger, exotic, forms of life. Unlike Arkkana, there are little to no clouds that rain anything in the upper levels of the atmosphere. Not even in the deeper levels, where it may seem like it does, but it doesn't. Continuing even deeper is where things get wonky. The gas becomes liquified due to the extreme pressure. There was only 1 successful attempt at getting this compression-liquified gas (elite dangerous reference lol).
Ondriall has a very high content of nitrogen, but that doesn't necessarily mean it is breathable. Of course, there are other gases like Methane or Ammonia, though. As for the average Hyperean, if they can exist in space without air for ~1-2 hours, then surely they can withstand Ondriall's atmosphere and pressure. Hyperants could care less, I mean Tallisar is literally a living blackhole so even he could be fine.
As for the life, it varies. One of the most common types of life is the Sparadoonaxes Fulcotrelis, which are colossal creatures. They are built like a massive web or a latticework of organic matter. They feed on the microorganisms or foliage, but rarely do they eat larger creatures. A group of Fulcotrelis is known as a "web" and sometimes may grow into each other and form one large organism, living together through the use of a symbiotic relationship. Although there is no fossil record to indicate where life on Ondriall came from, the most accepted theory is that life formed as small microorganisms, and evolved from there. The bones of most creatures are not hardy and therefore soft and have low density. The most comparable bone is that of cartilage or ligaments.
Overall, Ondriall is a beautiful gas giant, with complex life taking many forms, from the stormy depths with unfathomable conditions, or the contrasting color of the bands to the turbulence of them.
Natural Satellites:
Viris
Tavin
Yivan
Pheratis
Zadmor
Flaro
Finrax
Koleia
Cherezin
Ganov
Zithea
Obrosie
Daivolla
Hiubri
Meshan
Yeogawa
Total Amount of Natural Satellites:
| Major: 16 | Minor: 87 |
GENERAL INFO
- Created On: Windows
- Game Version: 1.3.116.0
CHARACTERISTICS
- Radius: 146.9 Mm
- Sea Level: None
- Surface Gravity: 30.6 m/s
- Rotational Period: N/A
- Escape Velocity: 94.80 km/s
- Mass: 9.89E+27kg
Atmosphere
- Height: 2,071 km
- Scale Height: 300 km
- Surface Air Density: 0.882 kg/m3
- Surface Temperature: 192 K
EQUIRECTANGULAR MAP
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“with Arkkana being larger than Odriall”
this is crazy
I don't know. @AzureRain, maybe in late 2024, 2025, or 2026 (unprobable). I may only upload planets and keep certain moons, considering how much work it takes to make a planet, get everything right, write the desc, and then post it. Plus, Arllath, one of the stars in the System, has many planets, so I am adding another star to balance out the planet count.
When antarius system will be here?
Thanks @AlphaAreospace, I just slapped on some lore, white bands, more storms, and bluer atmosphere and got this :P
THIS TBH LOOKS FIRE
@Hyperant I got it.
sending friend request @deepfriedfrenchtoast
@Hyperant Ended up making an account on discord, the username is rs2200
@Hyperant I dont use discord, its not really my thing. Maybe ill install it and make an account on it though.
Say, do you have discord? Maybe we can chat there if you have it @deepfriedfrenchtoast. My user is tallisar
@Hyperant Alrighty then, it has been fun to just have a physics discussion with someone, thanks for that. Sometimes I go down research rabbit holes when im making a planet and want to know how to make it more scientific. Doing that usually ends up making the descriptions for the planets I post long, Like Eirene and Hectarus. Maybe one last thing Id want to mention here is that a gas giant's bands would likely be pretty symmetric across the north and south hemispheres, since they are driven by north-south symmetrical jet streams. But there are some situations where seasonal variations on gas giants makes their bands look really wonky, like here for example. So it doesnt matter that much. Other than that, I guess its time to stop making this comment thread any longer than it already is.
3.88% Water Vapor it is @deepfriedfrenchtoast. This conversation has to end at some point (it is so, so long). The life on Ondriall formed through Abiogenesis, so maybe they do have something to do with the methane and other gases? One last thing is, thanks for your help. You taught me a lot, and I appreciate that. Now that the main problem is solved, there is currently no other reason to continue this convo. Also, I got inspired by your gas giants, because when I was first making Ondriall, it was yellow and orange. But after seeing your planets and how their appearance works, I decided to make a gas giant similar. You know the thing of Ammonia clouds, tholins, convection currents and cells, cool stuff.
@Hyperant When methane reacts with oxygen it makes CO2 and water, but it creates twice as much water as CO2, so if 1.94% of the CO2 in the atmosphere came from lightning igniting methane, and 1% was there from the start, then we would expect 3.88% water in the atmosphere. But lightning isnt the only thing that could have created the 1.94% extra CO2, organisms would also create CO2, but most would not create water, so the ratio of water to CO2 in the atmosphere would change depending on the ecosystems. But I cant guesstimate how much CO2 and water would be made by the living organisms on Ondriall since Im not the one who made it, that is, again, for you to decide.
I can think of one reaction that organisms could use to create more water than CO2. There is methane oxidation, where you continuously oxidize methane with something like oxygen. This would release electrons to power a gradient, and so on. This in the end would create 1 CO2 molecule and 2 water molecules. You can also use other molecules to oxidize methane, but the reaction products are more complicated. Theres a wiki page for methane oxidation maybe it can help a bit.
@deepfriedfrenchtoast Some creatures do indeed produce water vapor as a byproduct, though I do not know what chemical reaction should happen for them to produce it. Also the CO2 was already there during the planet's formation, and because of the creatures, it increased to the present amount. Also, why 3.88%? Does that mean I need to increase because of the aliens producing it?
@Hyperant Without any organic activity you'd expect about 3.88% water vapor (assuming that 1% of the CO2 was there from the start and didnt come from lightning.) I dont really know how realistic 1.64% water vapor would be since I dont know how influential all the organisms on Ondriall should be in creating CO2, it sounds feasible but really thats for you to decide.
Having the patience to be able to take in all that information seems like ann unachievable feat @deepfriedfrenchtoast. Honestly, I am amazed at how you know so much, considering we are technically in the same grade "levels" (and by that I mean high school).
The best part about it, is that we don't even know! Which gives us a lot of new possibilities on how to make alien life. That also means that because it is of our imagination, that also means that the possibilities are endless! I don't wanna sound enthusiastic, but because we truly do not know how alien life might evolve, how it will make use of things, the best thing we can do now is imagine.
So with all that being said, I think a percentage of 0.8% to 2% water vapor should do the thing. I would like to hear your thoughts about that, but for now, I decided to stick with 1.64% water vapor (also in the next update for Ondriall I am making more colors. It will be shown on ADV 4).
@Hyperant The lightning will create CO2 and water, the CO2 is already in the atmosphere, so you'd only need to increase water content to match it with the CO2 content, but how much you would increase the water amount depends on how much of the CO2 is produced by organisms that dont make water, and not lightning.
About the pigments, From what I know the pigments that the organisms would use depends on a lot more than the color of its light source, though you probably already know this. The photosynthesizing organisms on earth use a greenish pigment since their photosystem complexes I & II work better when they receive red and blue light, and so plants use a pigment that absorbs red and blue and reflects the wavelengths of light in between, which amounts to green. So which pigments the organisms use would really depend on what light their photosynthesis processes work best with. Though the systems the organisms would evolve would directly depend on what light they receive, so the organisms receiving the A-type light might have a similar color to earth pigments, and the organisms with F-type light might have their absorbed and reflected color range be shifted towards wider wavelengths of light. Though no one really knows how alien photosynthesis would evolve, so do whatever.
I myself am also in high school, I learned that information about photosynthesis from a 40 something minute video on Youtube (It was after I made the whole description for Eirene and I just realized that I don't understand how cellular processes really work, so I watched a video about it then.) Really the hardest part about learning all this stuff is just having the curiosity and the want to learn a topic since if you are curious about learning something then learning about it wouldnt be painful.
@Hyperant I also ran into the character limit but for some reason editing the comment and pasting what I wrote a second time worked.
I have hit the character limit, and it removed the rest of the comment, so this is what I manage to get through :P
That is quite a lot of info to take in @deepfriedfrenchtoast. No offense, but I really can't comprehend most of that. I mean, I am only in high school, so I know pretty much nothing. But, I can see what you are saying, since I do know a thing or two about ATP and Cellular Respiration.
As for the lightning... Because the lightning happens, does that mean I will need to increase the water vapor and CO2 content? I mean, the lightning forms in the deeper layers. Say, lower atmosphere or where you can still see some light, but where the clouds surround you most.
About the lifeforms, they are nothing like humans. As stated in the description, the creature Sparadoonaxes Fulcotrelis feeds on aero foliage/algae and/or photosynthesize. Currently, the only known lifeforms (that I have written in lore so far) are the Sparadoonaxes Fulcotrelis, and unnamed microorganisms, which come in many varieties, whether they are prokaryotic, to being eukaryotic. For now, I do not have a design for them, nor a complete idea of how they work. Some act like bacteria here on Earth, some photosynthesize, eat others, or some other ways. For now, the composition is like that of Terran Bacteria (Note: I get some info from Christian Cline's "The Teeming Universe" book, so I practically know nothing xd). The Fulcotrelis mainly get energy by photosynthesizing. The two black holes have their color, with the bigger one being white (i.e. spectral type A), and light similar to that of an F-type star. Considering that Targus, a planet in the same system, has plants that use Retinol as their pigment (which is like, purple). Alteraan has mainly red plants which use Carotenoids, but plants that use Retinol are much more common in the northern latitudes and high elevations (i.e. mountains), because the pigment is much easier to make, and takes in light much better than Carotenoids. Fulcotrelis currently have no set color, only that I am picking one of these four colors: Anthocyanin, Retinol, Xanthophyl, or Carotenoids. I do not know anything about how they work, (chemically) only that they are different in color, and absorb light differently. Carotenoids (which are red btw) work best on plants that orbit bluer stars. Retinol, Chlorophyll, and maybe Anthocyanin are suitable for stars below F-type. I don't know which is best, though. Considering that one black hole is white, and the other is like an F-G-type star (somewhere in between).
@Hyperant The lightning will only cause small methane ignition within the lightning itself, there isnt enough oxygen in the atmosphere for a single Flame to spread and ignite the whole atmosphere, but the methane and oxygen will still slowly be turned into CO2 and water because of the lightning, if you were confused about that.
Even if larger organisms feed on each other, (assuming these organisms are at least somewhat similar to us) they would still consume and produce gases since organisms that use cellular respiration in real life both need sugar and oxygen, and the organisms that use light would also need to take in and breathe out gases. I might as well say how the organisms create energy with photosynthesis/cellular respiration because I think its interesting, In both cycles, an electron gradient and a proton gradient is created (these gradients are basically charged particles that are driven through a membrane or outside/inside the membrane. You can think of it as energy going through a wire. The cell can then use the flow of these particles and the "pressure" they create to drive other processes.) The cell needs to get the energy necessary to "push" these particles through the membrane, which it gets from a different cycle/reaction. The electron gradient usually flows through a membrane and is used to create the proton gradient, which itself flows from the outside of the membrane to the inside, or vice versa. To give an example in photosynthesis, water flows into a PS II protein complex, and then with the help of a photon, gets transformed into oxygen, 2 positive hydrogens (positive hydrogen is just a single proton,) and 2 electrons. The protons will be used in the proton gradient, and the energized electrons flow through the membrane, creating an electron gradient. The electrons pass through proton pump proteins, as they flow they provide the energy to pump protons to the other side of the membrane. The less energetic electrons then enter the PS I protein complex and get energized again when another photon strikes the complex. The electrons then flow into a protein where an electron and a proton combine with a NADP+ molecule to make NADPH. (This only happens in non-cyclic photophosphorylation though.) The NADPH molecule then gets converted back into NADP+ in another reaction. The proton gradient created by the electron gradient is then used to power a protein that makes ATP from ADP (the ADP comes from another reaction, the one where the NADPH also goes.) ATP is used to provide energy to the cell. Why did I say all that? Idk you said you didnt know that much about cells. The organisms here would use something else than ATP, but I think they would still use charge gradients since they are a real good way to use the energy from light/oxidation reactions to power other molecule production.
good idea @deepfriedfrenchtoast. about the lightning, i meant like, can lightning still form, and not damage anything (i.e. atmosphere)? plus, as mentioned earlier in the description, it is not just the microbes that live on Ondriall. the microbes to much of the eating and gas producing. the large multi-cellular organisms feed on each other, the light from the black holes, or eat the aero foliage. giving some extra (unnecessary) info, i am much better with multi-cellular organisms, more than single-celled because that is just how i am, and my knowledge about cells if very limited. i learned most of my world-building skills from many authors, like Christian Cline, Alex Ries, and many others.
@Hyperant I dont think that lightning being lower down in the atmosphere would reduce methane combustion all that much since the strong convection in the atmosphere would mix all the gasses even in the lower atmosphere quite a bit. If most of the CO2 came from methane combustion, then you'd expect about twice as much water vapor in the atmosphere since that's what methane combustion produces, Having organisms produce CO2 from methane without creating water could work, though id still expect there to 0.5-1% water vapor in the atmosphere. Though if the life isnt making water with the hydrogen molecules in methane, then they would have to make a different waste gas with it, maybe they take in nitrogen and combine it with the hydrogen to make ammonia.
there is life on Ondriall, in the form of simple single-celled microorganisms. with the planet being new, i currently do not have a name for the creatures, stats, or backstory @deepfriedfrenchtoast. maybe i could say that they feed on methane and release CO2 as a by-product, but I'm not sure. i am working on many planets at the same time, mainly Arkkanis. Arkkanis has like, multi-cellular organisms, eukaryotic cells, carbon-based, you get the idea. since ondriall doesn't have much oxygen, i could make the life silicon-based. but, in the presence of oxygen, silicon turns into rock sooooo. plus there is lightning in the lower levels so maybe it is safe enough that the lightning strikes don't ignite the planet? about the water vapour, can i make them more than 0.1%, but still less than 1%?